Quite a good analysis, showing both depth and insight. You express yourself quite clearly and succinctly but look out for minor errors. Alt times you need to develop your points a little further. Don’t forget to mention the effect of some of the phonological features of the poem such as assonance and alliteration.
1. by P.B Shelly [Shelley]
2. pervious statement [previous]
3. the same rank as the Gods, he demands reverence from the Gods.
[lacks fuency here]
4. the poem communicates [communicate]
5. Shelley also included a story (told by Ozymandias) within a story (told by the traveller) within a story (told by the persona) [any ideas on what significance this might have?]