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critical analysis of Ozymandias - P.B Shelley

Uploaded by _jade_ | Jun 12, 2005 | AS Level > English > Homework
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Quite a good analysis, showing both depth and insight. You express yourself quite clearly and succinctly but look out for minor errors. Alt times you need to develop your points a little further. Don’t forget to mention the effect of some of the phonological features of the poem such as assonance and alliteration.

 

 

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1.       by P.B Shelly [Shelley]

 

 

 

2.       pervious statement [previous]

 

 

3. the same rank as the Gods, he demands reverence from the Gods.

 

[lacks fuency here]

 

 

4.       the poem communicates [communicate]

 

 

5.       Shelley also included a story (told by Ozymandias) within a story (told by the traveller) within a story (told by the persona) [any ideas on what significance this might have?]

 

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