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The ending is poor as the essay is good. You need to finish the information off somehow with a sentence or two about the versatility of bacteria and their diversity and that they are 'two faced' - good ones and bad ones. I worry about the fact that you have covered all aspects very quickly and in not much depth, though the mark scheme or the context of this essay are not clear. You have definitely covered every aspect of the use and economic importance of bacteria.