In interesting and throughout-provoking piece of work You have done some research into this which shows in the quotations you use. You might want to provide a few more examples like the one about 'Eastenders'. Your expression is generally clear and precise but note minor errors of the kind below. Make your conclusion stronger. Notes.

1. Indent 1 inch at the start of each new paragraph - in other words don't start your new paragraph on the right hand side of the page or even in the middle.

2. newspapers, Television or any [television]

3. promoting their programs or selling programmes]

4. which grabbed my attention to many issues. [awkward expression here]

5. Recent episodes of Eastenders ["Eastenderes" - because it's a title]

6. adults behave towards kids. use 'children' rather than 'kids' = this is a formal essay]

7. Make your conclusion stronger - end with a quotation perhaps!

How Does the government affect the housing market? Describe the policies used and its effects on buyers and sellers?