Laura,
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A competent essay which I would award a B Grade to.
Planning is essential, and this has been carefully thought through!
There are a couple of minor grammatical positioning errors.
It is always worth checking the positional errors for verbs, together with their tenses and ensuring that the prepositions are followed by the correct case!
All Nouns MUST have capital letters, and all clauses must be separated by commas!
The use of specific phrases is quite good.
Useful paragraph starters are phrases like………
Untersuchen wir zuerst die positive/negative Seite……
Man kann an mehrere Gruende denken………………..
Die Vor und Nachteile muessen gegeneinander abgewogen werden…………
………………………can be a good presentational aid