Salut! I had problems downloading your attachment to begin with but it seems
to be OK now.
Click here to download
your marked work.
Watch out for plurals – you have missed a few –s on the
end of words.
In describing your 2 jobs you’ve used the same adjectives –
try to think of something different to show you know more French!
If you'd like to send me an improved version I should be able to check it
before the end of half-term - when I guess it's due! Bonne Chance!